New Tales of the Great Wall
Audrey Lau, G
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roup 1: Fiction, Renaissance College
Mimi, Mima, Tee and Fifi were on the plane to Beijing, the capital of China!
"
I'm going to take loads of pictures of the Wall." said Mimi. "Here’s the picture of the Great Wall!
ck it out on face-book!" said Mima when they arrived. "Wow!" they shouted. "Beijing is so
tiful at night!" squeals Fifi. "Let's go to the hotel, we're sleepy!" said Tee and Mimi. "Yeah!" all
of them said.
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They went to their hotel and went to their room. They went in bed. "Ah!" said Tee, "this is really comfy!"
said Mima. "Let's get to sleep, we have a big day tomorrow!" said Mimi. They slept peacefully at until dawn.
The birds flow gracefully in the sunlight shining on everything below it. While the clouds floated to and
flow in the fading blue sky, people below bustles and bushed in markets and shops trying to get foods and
things, they want to buy or trade. Slowly the sun began to rise, it was an amazing sight the Chinese ever saw.
Adventures Starts
Mimi, Mima, Tee and Fifi woke up, they got changed and headed to the dining room for breakfast.
After breakfast, they started packing their things that they need for the trip.
"
I'll bring my camera." said Mimi. "I'll bring my notebook." said Fifi. "I'll bring my binoculars." said Tee.
"
I'll bring my phone, emergency kit, and the snacks." said Mima. "Come on! Let's go!" said Tee.
They got on the taxi, put their stuff in the back cubord and buckled their seat-belts. "I heard that the Great
Wall is very long like a dragon, it would take us a whole year to go across it I think." said Mimi. "Yeah!!" said
the others. Soon they were there at last! They got off the taxi, climbed on to the wall.
"
Hello!" said a voice. "Who said that?" Mima asked. "It’s me, the Wall!" said the Wall. "You may take
pictures of me if you like." said the Wall. "Okay!" said Fifi.
They took many pictures with silly faces, happy faces, scary faces, sad faces and angry faces. "Goodbye, I
promise you i will wave to you from the airplane." said Mimi.
"
Welcome back next time!" said the Wall. "We'll come back next time!" Mimi said. "Bye!" they shouted to
Wall. "Bye!" the Wall called back.
They went back to the hotel to pack.
Back Home
When they went back to the hotel, they were packed and ready to go.
"
I'm so happy to be going home!" said Tee. "Yeah!" shouted the others.
Soon they were on the plane and taking off.
"
Look! I see the wall." said Mima. "Bye!" shouted the Wall. "Bye!" shouted the girls. "I wish we could go
to Beijing again next time." said Fifi. "Yeah!" said the others.
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